Saturday, September 18, 2010
Ms. Hempel=Every Teachers Initial Attitude?
Due to the fact that her father pushed her to always be an overachiever and to strive to be different, which comes into play quite a bit. Throughout everyones lifetime people will notice that all the new teachers always have so many high hopes and try so hard, sometimes even too hard. Since her father pushed her so much she has this mindset that forces her to not only get in the zone of "I'm going to be the best teacher ever" from the beginning, but locks her into place so she always has to be the best, do the best and be different while pleasing everyone. This is of course an almost impossible task which backfires on her when she gives the students too much freedom. Overall, this reckless move proves that her desire to be the best and different drives her teachings more than her common sense and her own teachings, which seems to be every other new teachers motives, from my personal experience at least.
"The Very Cup of Trembling"
This piece of symbolism is of such great significance because it is used in the closing statement and excels in summing up everything that happened in one last short statement. The cup of trembling symbolizes not only the holy aspect of Sonny renewing himself, but also when looked at with its surroundings, can be viewed with something else. This something else is displayed altogether as Sonny's relationship with his brother and how it has changed in the end. In the beginning their relationship was rough and rugged, hence the "shakey" cup. However at the end, even though the cup is still shaking because the brother may not be completely adjusted, it is right above Sonny's head and the cup (symbolizing his brother) shows that they finally have the same view and they both are seeing on the same level now because the cup is so close to Sonny's eye level, and that they even have a real bond besides typical brotherly bonds.
Crazy or Ingenious
But when talking to my wife about the story and if she would accept the book like many of the other parents did, ironically, my wife agreed with it. But it depends on the purpose of what the teacher is trying to teach and if this book necessary to teach that. Maybe what the kids need are books like this that grip them of the reality of life. Ms. Hemple seems to want to teach the kids to break traditional ideas that maybe held by their parents from another generation. So in prescribing this book, the kids where very interested in it so maybe she wasn’t crazy but ingenious.
Sometimes liberality leads one to fall
Mrs. Sein grew the courage to take control of her life and drive the car on the road. This is something that probably wouldn’t have happened if she lived at home, alone with Mr. Sein and never met Elliot. But tragically, she got in the accident which devastated her. This moment of liberality might have been the damaging event of her life that would prevent her from reaching out again. Though the story doesn’t tell us what happened after the ending it was hinted that adjusting to her new life in America might never happen.
Role of a Jazz Musician
The music could not just be listened to. While Creole was describing the music Sonny's brother didn't just hear the music anymore he could feel it. He used adjectives that showed he could feel with apprehension filling the air. It gave the feeling of nothing moving in my mind but the music around you. Also, Creole pointed out the fact that the music can only slightly be changed before it ruins the whole feeling of the Blues. When Creole's friends were playing he mentioned that they were pushing the limits just so everybody would be paying attention and not lose interest.
Kevin Ostempowski Post 4
Sonny's Blues
Mrs.Sen's
Story to Tell
Who is Ideal?
Dave's Question
Unfortunately we ran out of time in class to discuss the excellent question Dave raised in his presentation, so I will post it below if anyone would like to respond to it or use it as a prompt for one of their posts this week.
Dave asks:
"What is the significance of the shaking cup on top of the piano in relation to Sonny? Does this somehow relate to the brothers' relationship in any way?"
As a hint, if anyone would like to investigate the significance of the shaking cup, or "the cup of trembling," as Baldwin calls it, further it is actually a reference from the Old Testament.
Best,
--JI
Friday, September 17, 2010
The power of music.
Usually I end my blogs with a question this time I leave it with a song. You might be surprised to find out that Robert Downey Jr. made a CD. Some of his songs were written during his time of drug abuse and some after. I found this CD while over seas and while going through a rough time myself it helped me out alot. I'm sharing this song with you guys because if you listen I think you can hear some of that same pain Sonny must have been going through and what his music may have sounded like. As soon as I read this piece I found a direct correlation to Robert and this CD. I hope you enjoy it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r4Hpq1CYg04
with commentary:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rGe66e1ONq0
Thomas Moss (post 4)
Knowing We Aren't Alone
“Sonny’s Blues” by James Baldwin does an excellent job of explaining what the role of musicians in society really is. Some people, like Sonny’s brother through most of the story, believe that musicians are just “good-time people”, and some of them are. They get involved in all sorts of trouble, like drugs, for a range of different reasons. But all musicians do have an actual role in society. Unlike policemen, plumbers, and other similar people, who help all parts of society everyday, musicians appeal to certain kinds of people. For the people who actually listen to their music, musicians take care of their minds and souls, much like other artists do. People in society turn to artists when they are troubled, overjoyed, looking for a good time, or in need of a coping mechanism. Musicians take care of people in both their good and bad times. People take whatever the musician is expressing, whether it is sorrow or joy, and apply it to their own lives, and receive comfort in the fact that someone else has felt what they are feeling. We see this in “Sonny’s Blues” throughout the story. Sonny’s music at the end was so expressive that his brother followed Sonny’s entire life story in the music, but he also applied Sonny’s suffering in music to his own life, and took comfort in the fact that he was not the only one who has had bad times. Sonny’s brother knew that this was happening for other people in the audience, when he heard other “real” applause.
Music is important in this story, as well as in real life, because it is an escape from whatever is happening in your life. It accentuates whatever feelings you might have at that moment. Society uses music as a celebratory thing at parties, or for sorrowful occasions, like hymns at a funeral. We all take comfort in the musician’s story expressed in the song, and feel relieved that we aren’t the only ones to be feeling the way we are. As Sonny’s brother calls music “the only light we’ve got in all this darkness.” We all take that light provided by the musician and use it to illuminate our own lives and take relief, knowing that we are not alone.
Out of Place
Throughout the whole story little and big things show up to show how Mrs. Sen is out of place. For instance, at the very beginning of the story Eliot is describing the apartment they live in with mismatched pieces of rug in front of the pieces of furniture. Mrs. Sen also cuts up vegetables for dinners all day long, which normally isn't done in America. She gets a letter from a person in India later in the story and everything seems to unravel. At the beginning and towards the middle everything seems to be going fine in her times spent with Eliot, but after she reads the letter she tells Eliot that the people in India think she lives like a queen. This is what brought out how she misses everyone in India and if she did want to go for a visit she would not be able to go for a long time, and also brings out how distant her and her husband are because of the fact he doesn't seem to care much about India anymore or her feelings.
Kevin Ostempowski post 3
Accomplice
I believe there is a very subtle yet very important lesson in this story. When Ms. Hempels chooses the book for her students to read with all of the swear words in it and the abusive stepfather I feel like is her missing her past and seeing how much things have changed. She speaks of her father always being very loving and caring and how grades almost didn't matter to him. Well the past is the past.
I believe this book was a wake up call to both her and her students. She says at one point in the story how she isn't the type of person that can put a swear word in front of every sentence and make it seem natural like everyone else. To me this is her missing her past when words like glamorously, radiantly, and heralded were the words used to get people's attention not swear words like in today's society.
Anthony DiChristopher
post 3
One of the best
On more of a personal note, she reminds me of one of my teachers back in middle school. This teacher would be at school until 5:15 everyday no matter what even though she was able to leave at 3. She was also a family friend and whenever we went places she would have a notebook and take things down that may be helpful in her lesson plans and new ideas for class. She would spend hours doing lessons plans and rereading them over and over again, and she would always say that she hoped that the kids were learning from her and pondered over if she was doing a good job or not. Although I hate to see a person worry or spend so much of their life on things like that I think that's what makes a good teacher into a great teacher. Teachers like, Ms Hempel and the one I had in middle school are the most effective in my opinion. You can feel the passions that they have for teaching and the kids and it makes you want to work harder not only for yourself, but for them too. (Shawn Parkhurst, 4)
Teacher's Pet
Ms. Hempel had a strong relationship between her and her students. She would ask them for advice and she would listen to them with her full attention. I wouldn't ask the students for advice all the time because that is like someone else doing your work for you. It is important however to have an open mind and is open for discussion so you get to know the students better and keep them on good terms. This not only was good for the teacher, but also good for the students. This is because it helps students to interact with one another and increases their social skills and creativity like writing their own annecotes with are good teaching methods to have. In the end, I think Ms. Hempel was an effecticve teacher because she got her point across in her own way and it shows that every teacher has their own method of teaching that not one teacher is the same. (Mason Roessler Post 4)
Thursday, September 16, 2010
Blog Prompts For Lahiri, Bynum, and Baldwin
Below are three blog prompts (one for each story we read this week) to use if you wish when formulating your posts for this week.
1. In relation to "Mrs. Sen's" by Jhumpa Lahiri meditate on the significance of food in the story. How does food function as a metaphor for culture and human emotions? What does food allow us to see about the characters that we otherwise would not?
2. In relation to "Accomplice" by Sarah Shun-Lien Bynum, in your opinion is Ms. Hempel an effective or an ineffective instructor? According to Bynum, are the best instructors those who seek to be their students' "accomplices" as opposed to working against their students or feeling as though they are superior to them? Support your opinions with specific examples from the story.
3. Using James Baldwin's "Sonny's Blues" to guide your response, discuss what the role of the artist in society is. Does the blues musician fulfill a social function? According to the story, why is music important? How does it help Sonny--or people in general--to survive?
Also, make sure that your blog posts center on analyzing and giving your personal opinions and interpretations of the text as opposed to summarizing the plot. Summaries are unnecessary as you should compose your posts from the standpoint that everyone has already read the text in question and will understand whatever aspect of it you choose to blog about.
Happy blogging!
--JI
What teachers are real people to?
Ms. Hempel also has her students write their own anecdote. I think here she is trying to boost the children's self-esteem so that they wouldn't be scared like she is. She wants the children to stick up for themselves and tell their parents what they feel about their work and themselves through their own words. A parent can argue with a teacher about their child but how do you argue with the child about himself? You can't you can only talk with them, help them be an "accomplice" to their lives.
I'm a parent and I am a child education major. I'm already a teacher of my own child but someday I will hopefully be teaching other children. I hope that when I get in front of my class and I have that fear I recall this story and find a way to teach the children in a way that causes shock and interest. How would you have dealt with your child coming home and hearing that they're reading a book with those swear words? Let me tell you before reading this I would've freaked but now I think I would just ask more questions to try and get an understanding of why my child was reading this. I realized that maybe some teachers are real people that have real ideas and aren't just scary people who hate me. Thanks MS. Hempel.
Thomas Moss (post 3)
Wednesday, September 15, 2010
A Great Kind of Teacher
Ms. Hempel reads more like a person than a teacher for me. I still have the idea that many people have in high school, which was that the teachers didn’t have real lives, never left the school, and slept in their offices. I still have this idea, even though my mother is a teacher. I see Ms. Hempel as a person first, not as a teacher. Ms. Hempel has real feelings. She is stressed out by these anecdotals that she has to write, she loved her father, and she was nervous in front of a room full of parents. It made her a very real character for me. The fact that she has to take medication also makes her real to me. She has to have a little help to get through her day, but the medications don’t always help. They dull her mind and twist her ideas into something that she didn’t recognize. That makes her very real to me.
Typical Teacher or Not?
I think that it wasn't a "typical teacher" assignment to have the students write their own anecdotals. It was one of those assignments that could be viewed as a good idea and also as a bad idea. It was a good idea in the sense that it gives the parents an understanding as to how the students feels about themselves as long as they took it seriously. I believe that the students should be able to critic themselves once and awhile to really give parents and the teacher their insight. It could be a bad idea, in the fact that the parents in grades 8th and under actually do really care about how their student is doing in class and the fact that this anecdotal didn't even come from the teacher takes the meaning away from it. They want the teacher to see what they see in their child. The parents' pride in their child is so strong but they need that boost from a teacher saying they see the intelligence, also. This wasn't a typical teacher action but I think that once and awhile this is an assignment that should be handed out. (Kelcey Summers, 1)
Monday, September 13, 2010
Conflict in the home
One passage in the story gives off a very awkward vibe and I think describes Mr. and Mrs. Sen's relationship. When the author describes the Sen's apartment when they finally received company it appears that they are trying to promote an ideal image of a family and home. However, it is my belief that this is all just a cover up to hide what the real emotions and conflicts are in their relationship. One particular sentence I believe is a good metaphor to describe what is really going on in their home, "White drum-shaped lampshades flanking the sofa..." The author's word choice is very important here, the drums could be a symbol for the drums of war and she uses the word flanking, which is another description of a war tactic. I think this relation to war is trying to describe the awkwardness of their relationship and marital conflicts that are taking place. (Shawn Parkhurst, 1)
Reliving the Past
Ms. Hempel comes across as being quite judgemental and nervous. When she is explaining her book selection to the parents of her students, she went back and forth about what to say and what not to say in her head. She desperatley wanted to say the right response in hopes of feeling accepted amongst her peers. Then when the parents shower her with compliments, it really alters her mood creating for an easier atmosphere. I found it interesting that this helped to create her flashbacks to her father and how he could "always be counted on." She is sort of self-absorbed and likes to relive her past memories, but with the attention of her father. This is where her desperate need for attention would fall into place.
(David Roberts, Post 4)
Alone
Eliot in the story is on the opposite end of the spectrum when compared to Mrs. Sen. Like Mrs. Sen, he is alone for most of the day with his mother off working. However, it seems like this does not bother Eliot the least bit. Even when his mother is present, he is neglected most of the time, while his mother drinks wine. In retrospect, he has essentially been taking care of himeself this whole time, which might be why he is not concerned about his mother's where whereabouts. In the end, he is described as actually being left alone at the house with no babysitter. The life that Eliot is so accustomed to is a dark shadow upon Mrs. Sen's new life.
(David Roberts, Post 3)
The Road Not Taken
We knew in the beginning of the story that Mrs. Sen couldn't drive. She didn't even have her license. She practiced with Mr. Sen from time to time but after a while she just wanted to give up or would always say "another time." The one day she did want to drive could't have come at a worse time. This is the fact that she got into an accident when Elliot was in the car and Mr. Sen wasn't there. She could have seriously injured herself and Elliot which became crucial to the story. I think when Elliot's mom found out what happened, she realized something. It doesn't matter how safe you think someone is anything can happen at anytime. This is when she decided Elliot didn't need a baby sitter that he was fine on his own. (Mason Roessler Post 3)